LLD100A Software Engineering in United States Discipline Investigation Essay

LLD100A Software Engineering in United States Discipline Investigation Essay

need to write a 1250 Discipline Investigation (DI) essay

i did write it. but i fail for this essay. can you help me to rewrite it base on my article. u need to add ot or change it. but my concern need to be same.

below i will put the question that i ask. and one student example . and my draft

and i need to find two outside source.